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Hi everyone & welcome to my blog “Health & Happiness”!
My blog has an emphasis on eating healthy and going organic. The main purpose of my blog is to inform and persuade you on the benefits of being healthy, becoming aware of what you are eating, how it is made, and where it came from. This blog is perfect for people who have just joined the bandwagon on becoming healthier and who want to lose weight.
This blog follows along with my journey to becoming a healthier and happier person & I hope that it will help you on your journey as well!
Health & Happiness 
I think your about page and your entire blog go very hand in hand. You provided a lot of information as to how anyone can eat healthier, and provided your experience to give a great example on how to do so. One criticism I would offer is that you do a lot of telling, rather than showing. This can have a dull effect on the reader sometimes. An example: Rather saying something like “pasta covered in red sauce,” you could say “smooth hot lava running down….” This allows your piece to have a more elaborate effect on the reader and keeps them going to the next paragraph.